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Narrative scope and insularity and Laura Powells Burn Mark

 Narrative scope and insularity and Laura Powells Burn Mark


Laura Powells recently released Burn Mark is a book that seems to tick all the right boxes. The premise is solid and intriguing, the world-building is rich and believable, and the characters realistic.

And yet I found it disappointingly bland. Perhaps its that my paranormal palate has been overwhelmed over the past few years. Perhaps Im just a grumpy old contrarian. But somehow, I simply couldnt muster up any enthusiasm for this one. The writing slouches along, placid and lazy and dully matter-of-fact, the characters undergo exactly the type and degree of change expected from the outset, and the plot is a commuter train making its way from one end of the line to the other exactly as detailed by the conductor.

Our setting is an alternative London where witchcraft is very much alive, and so too is the Inquisition, its purpose being to identity, monitor, police and punish witchkind. Our two key players are Lucas Stearne, son of the Chief Prosecutor of the Inquisition, and who learns that not only is he a witch, but an immensely powerful one; and Glory Starling Wilde, a tough-girl witch from a mafia-esque coven. The two, as you might imagine, find themselves working together, and in doing so discover a shocking series of betrayals and lies.

Its a case of narrative predestination, and its proof thatfor this reader at leasta tightly honed, carefully layered plot can undermine a story. Everything slots in so tidily together that its like an epic jigsaw puzzle. Unfortunately, one persons tidy plotting is another persons narrative restrictiveness, and the latter was the case for me. When everything is so neatly foreshadowed and the characters roles are so tidily telegraphed its easy for a narrative to feel as though it cant possibly go any other way.

I was chatting with a romance author the other day about maintaining interest and suspense when the end of a novel is known to the reader, and she noted how its a delicate balance to push the boundaries while still working within a given formula. This one, I couldnt help but feel, never quite pushed those boundaries. It relies on the depth of its world-buildingwhich is admittedly impressiveto carry it, and I couldnt help but feel that the rest of the novel wasnt quite there. Its a novel thats competent enough, but whose purpose I cant quite fathom. I had a similar reaction to Julianna Baggotts Pure, which though beautifully written and thoughtfully explicated feels more like an exercise in setting than anything, and I wonder whether its a result of authors brainstorming dystopian-esque what if scenarios.

I think a lot of my qualms here have to do with scope and also with narrative insularity. During my recent reading of Mary Hoopers Newes from The Dead, I found myself objecting to a certain plot point at the end that felt as though it had come out of nowhere. And yet, this event actually occurred in real life. But its not, as one might think, a case of fact being stranger than fiction. Rather, its to do with the scope of the story and what readers have been conditioned to expect from a book. The plot point in the Hooper would probably have been perfectly acceptable had the books scope been expanded to offer some reason or motivation for its occurrence. But real lifeupon which the book is baseddoesnt allow for that. Real life is all about messy boundaries and unknowns. Things do have reasons and motivations. We just dont see them, because theyre beyond the scope of our experience or knowledge.

My initial misgivings over the Hooper made me consider just how much readers are conditioned to accept logic and narrative containedness in their reading. In todays fiction (the final extent, obviously, varying depending on genre and target audience) it seems that everything has to be telegraphed, because everything that happens in a book has to able to be saliently determined from prior informationwe need to be presented with all of the facts. In few books outside the mystery genre have I found this more clearly than in Burn Mark. My copy, in fact, is bristling with post-it notes highlighting references to items or information that will clearly come into play at a later point in the book.

Curiously, the result of this for me was a book that left me feeling underwhelmed. Not because it wasnt competentits a solid enough book, after allbut because I felt as though I was never being tested as a reader. I never felt unsafe, or curious, or lost, or challenged. I felt rather as though I was a tourist on a bus being told what was what and what I should photograph. And I think the perfect tidiness of this book is what resulted in this being a less than memorable read for me.


With thanks to Bloomsbury Australia for the review copy

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  1. Given that Burn Mark is a YA marketed novel I would expect more telegraphing in it than I would like in an adult novel. It is partly I think why so few YA novels appeal to me because there is such manipulation of direction and emotion there is not enough room for many surprises.
    shelleyrae @ Bookd Out recently posted..It’s Monday! What Are You Reading?

    • Stephanie /

      Very good point, Shelleyrae. It brings to mind another issue I often have with YA novelshighly unambiguous endings. I prefer things to be left a little more open so that I can more readily bring my own interpretations and analyses and thoughts to a story, but I find this hard when a story is wrapped up with a hard-as-cement epilogue.

      Curiously, I often find that middle grade books seem to offer more scope for all of this, despite being pitched to a younger audience. Its a very playful genre, and one that seems quite open to experimentation. I wonder whether this is because MG readers are still open to wonder and zaniness in a way that YA readers, who may be looking for order and logic within the world, arent?

  2. The more you read, the more you can guess where the plot is going? Maybe younger readers, who have read fewer books, might find the plot less predictable? Also, maybe MG books arent compelled to over-emphasize the romantic elements at the expense of the story?
    Laurie C recently posted..Blog Tour: Heaven Should Fall by Rebecca Coleman #HeavenShouldFall

    • Good points Laurie. I think experience certainly breeds familiarity which affects how a reader relates to a specific genre that relies on a basic trope.
      shelleyrae @ Bookd Out recently posted..It’s Monday! What Are You Reading?

      • Stephanie /

        Good point, Shelleyrae. I wonder whether its that familiarity that makes these books popular with younger readers? It makes them more accessible and easy to stomach, perhaps, and may well give teens an opportunity focus on themes and what ifs over following a complex plot instead.

    • Stephanie /

      Great points Laurie. Youre right that it might be overfamiliarity here on my behalf. Ive read several books this year that have involved the son of a prominent government official + poor girl from the slums banding together to overthrow a corrupt government. To be fair, this one doesnt really have a notable romantic element, but theres just so much weight given to the world building that it drowns out everything else. Its almost as though the plot *couldnt* be anything other than what it is as otherwise we wouldnt be able to fully appreciate the world-building.

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